#61

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Philadelphia, PA
We're probably going to stick with the name horizons. We already had an aftershave label mostly done before it was mentioned that catie's bubbles has used the name before.

I reached out to Chris and he didn't have any issues with it...

Here's the label we have. I'm not 100% sure whether or not I'm going to tweak the font color.

[Image: k7JpxBK.jpg]

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#62
(04-23-2023, 02:00 AM)andrewjs18 Wrote: We're probably going to stick with the name horizons. We already had an aftershave label mostly done before it was mentioned that catie's bubbles has used the name before.

I reached out to Chris and he didn't have any issues with it...

Here's the label we have. I'm not 100% sure whether or not I'm going to tweak the font color.

[Image: k7JpxBK.jpg]
May be a glossy lead like font shall give more punch to the label.

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#63

Just Here for the Shaves
Williamsburg, KY
(04-23-2023, 02:00 AM)andrewjs18 Wrote: We're probably going to stick with the name horizons.  We already had an aftershave label mostly done before it was mentioned that catie's bubbles has used the name before.

I reached out to Chris and he didn't have any issues with it...

Here's the label we have.  I'm not 100% sure whether or not I'm going to tweak the font color.

[Image: k7JpxBK.jpg]

I'm glad and figured you check with them and they wouldn't care. Looks great ! The lettering doesn't show very clear/crisp but that may have been your intent.

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#64

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Well done Andrew. I love it.

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#65

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Gold lettering. You can never go wrong with gold. Or blood red. Blood always catches peoples’ eye.

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#66

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I like Pizza
(04-23-2023, 08:37 AM)Dave in KY Wrote:
(04-23-2023, 02:00 AM)andrewjs18 Wrote: We're probably going to stick with the name horizons.  We already had an aftershave label mostly done before it was mentioned that catie's bubbles has used the name before.

I reached out to Chris and he didn't have any issues with it...

Here's the label we have.  I'm not 100% sure whether or not I'm going to tweak the font color.

[Image: k7JpxBK.jpg]

I'm glad and figured you check with them and they wouldn't care. Looks great ! The lettering doesn't show very clear/crisp but that may have been your intent.
The DFS and silhouette needs to stand out in Red, the rest is a well thought out softer/concealed.  I like that.  Very different than the “HORIZONS” realeased by CATIE’S Bubbles. Few years back.

Nice Work, LOVE THE BEAR

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#67

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(04-23-2023, 02:00 AM)andrewjs18 Wrote: We're probably going to stick with the name horizons.  We already had an aftershave label mostly done before it was mentioned that catie's bubbles has used the name before.

I reached out to Chris and he didn't have any issues with it...

Here's the label we have.  I'm not 100% sure whether or not I'm going to tweak the font color.

[Image: k7JpxBK.jpg]
Just Remember…..if somethings “been done” and many many “things” have been done….You MUST make sure “DFS Horizons” blows any past Horizons out of the water making them forgotten….

I would say “is it worth doing” if it doesn’t trump any other Horizons, however this is software.  

DFS Horizons better be a strong scented software kit, I’m tired of the lightly scented trash out here…

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#68

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Philadelphia, PA
(04-26-2023, 09:44 AM)ExtraProtein Wrote:
(04-23-2023, 02:00 AM)andrewjs18 Wrote: We're probably going to stick with the name horizons.  We already had an aftershave label mostly done before it was mentioned that catie's bubbles has used the name before.

I reached out to Chris and he didn't have any issues with it...

Here's the label we have.  I'm not 100% sure whether or not I'm going to tweak the font color.

[Image: k7JpxBK.jpg]
Just Remember…..if somethings “been done” and many many “things” have been done….You MUST make sure “DFS Horizons” blows any past Horizons out of the water making them forgotten….

I would say “is it worth doing” if it doesn’t trump any other Horizons, however this is software.  

DFS Horizons better be a strong scented software kit, I’m tired of the lightly scented trash out here…
That's our goal and we hope everyone likes what we're going to put out. A few people have smelled the samples already and its been well received.

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#69
(This post was last modified: 04-27-2023, 03:07 PM by rocket.)
I would humbly suggest adjusting the visual hierarchy on the label:
- reduce the visual contrast and weight of the container volume details which right now is one of the highest contrast items, but least visually important. 
- keep the bear as the hero and the foreground element
- increase contrast of the horizons and DFS logo to come forward visually into the middle ground, so in front of mountains but behind the bear
- select font hue that is more analogous to existing palette

This is a rough mock adjustment concept, but something like this:

[Image: sZ9JY3b.png]

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#70

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Philadelphia, PA
(04-27-2023, 02:58 PM)rocket Wrote: I would humbly suggest adjusting the visual hierarchy on the label:
- reduce the visual contrast and weight of the container volume details which right now is one of the highest contrast items, but least visually important. 
- keep the bear as the hero and the foreground element
- increase contrast of the horizons and DFS logo to come forward visually into the middle ground, so in front of mountains but behind the bear
- select font hue that is more analogous to existing palette

This is a rough mock adjustment concept, but something like this:

[Image: sZ9JY3b.png]

I like that. do you have a high resolution version you could email to me? I'll send you a PM.

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